I knew right when i saw you,
My life had just then changed.
No longer would things be the same,
My life had rearranged.
My winter eve's were filled with warmth,
My rain clouds turned to sun.
My heart no longer walked along,
It burst into full run.
We never were apart,
Together all the time.
Walking everywhere we went,
With your hand inside mine.
But slowly still my warmth-filled nights,
turned back to frosty eves.
My sunny skies went cloudy,
And in last place my heart did wheeze.
I knew right when i met you,
As we continued to converse.
That my life had changed forever,
I didnt know it was for worse,
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow! You truly have a lot of talent hidden away in your pen! I loved this poem. The natural progression of this relationship seemed to follow the course htat many often take. Your rhyme was great and the flow was superb. An outstanding poem.
Love and luck in all you endeavor.
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