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Where did the light go?

Where did the light go?
It's gentle color is soft as the morning dew
It dances upon the wall with liveliness.

Where did the light go?
I see it no longer
I sit and await its return,
But alas, no light is bestowed upon my eagerness.

It dissapears so quickly,
I fear it may never return
It plays with my mind,
It know what I want.
It shows itself breifly, only to again be lost in the darkness.

Where did the light go?
I can't see my way
It is welcome back anytime
Be it night or be it day.

Author notes

It's about losing your way in the darkness of life, and wanting to be found in the light.

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  • -DarkExpressions-
    January 13, 2007

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    The message in this poem was strong! I really like it! Great job!!! I also like the picture w/ the background, that added to it greatly!