barely alive...
shallow breathing as small
sighs of pain escape me
my heart falters
time creeps slowly across my skin
living, waiting...
dying.
it's all the same now
betrayed by trust...
pierced & broken
ripped & torn
scorned & burned
laid open...
invaded by all who knew me
though I was never known
tragic end...
slain.
nailed to my cross
by my blood stained name
and the shame of knowing you.
~Rhiannon
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woah well done keep up the good work
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Well, thank you.
Sorry for the delay in replying to your comment. For some ungodly reason, I'm not being notified of my notes. Ap is a bastard sometimes. 
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wow this is wow !!!!!
its perfected
wow i felted you pain wow
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i like this a lot. it's perfect in every way. well worded, well crafted and very real.
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Thank you so very much!
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"and the shame of knowing you"...you really do have a way with words...good job, keep up the good work, though I wish you'd write something happy once in a while
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Write somethng happy once in a while...lol, I have no talent for that. Seriously. It takes a special kind of person to be able to write about happy things and the sweeter things in life. Thanks for your comment. It means alot. Hope your doing well.
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What a deep and dark poem. So full of emotions. I have a lot of ghosts in my past too. Excellent write
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Thank you for commenting. It is very much appreciated. *smiles* Your little girl is beautiful! Or is that you? *laughs*
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