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Illusions

Don't judge a book,
By the binding of its pages.
This creature's been around,
Since before the dark ages.
Make believe and Pixie dust,
is not all it engages.
For in the belly of this pure white beast,
A monstrous secret rages.


The Wise men of the valley,
Thought they had all the facts.
The death and sadness on mankind,
were self-inflicted acts.
But this wasn't the truth,
Once again their thoughts were wacked.
So everyone was blind-sighted,
When the unicorns attcked!


Who would have ever guessed,
That such a purity black?
It seems that for such evil deeds,
This creature had a knack.
And where the last one ran off to,
The wise men couldn't track...




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  • troyias gold member
    January 23, 2007
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    interesting

    Very different approach for this picture. Well written and enjoyable. the images that your words bring forth are different in an amazing way.

    thank you for entering this contest. Good Luck.

    *Go with God*

    Valerie


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 22, 2007

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    Nice take on pic #1! an interesting read with some well crafted thoughts and words. Best wishes to you in the contest!
    Frogz~
  • deleteit
    January 10, 2007
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    Ohhhh this is nice! Very creative without a doubt!
    Good luck