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Welcome new poet !



Welcome, new friend, to a place in our heart
In your journey we take a hand

Anticipating each new work
As you travel this virtual land

We see you hold the promise within
Written words not yet shown

We will watch you bloom in splendor
As you struggle here to grow

To see the seed your palm once held
The oak we will behold

So come along dear poet new
Into our embrace enfold

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    January 13, 2007
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    < Sadly

    I could not include the picture here, as it truly was completely about the picture and his welcome, woven together. Ah well, I take it that point did not come across well ( in the images of the hands, the seed, the tree to be, etc)

  • TwilightPanther Moderators member
    January 11, 2007

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    VERY NICE

    This is a very warm welcome and a very good piece for a contest.I like the last line,So come along dear poet new into our embrace enfold...


    • Lady-Pegasus
      January 12, 2007
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      Thanks my friend

      Yes it was written exclusively for this contest to welcome the new poet.. don't you love her idea of intro of a new poet this way? I wish I had had something like that, hehe!