Still, there is something...
hallowed.
Our hearts
tempered in tears
standing in sorrows
yet beating as one...
as we are one...
~Rhiannon
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Beautiful in its simply delivery.
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Well, thank you. I appreciate your kindness.
I'm not a very poetic person, one bit.
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great
we all must be one with ourselves before we can be one with each other keep doing well
love papa -
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Thank you, William, for your kind comment. It means the world to me. *smiles*
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This reminds me of my own writing... sort of. In that I don't understand it.
I just scared myself by putting two of these :: I thought it looked like an insect. But I'm over it now. All good.
'standing in sorrows
yet beating as one...
as we are one...'
This makes... me think of Adam (and Eve).
Wonderful.
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Awwww...thank you so much Skitz. I'm glad you liked it.
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You're welcome.
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finally, a little on the happy side...though, of course, still greatly moving and flowing...kind of like the person has been side-tracked from writing her usually sad things...
Keep on smiling...keep on smiling....keep it going 'round....
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Thank you, thank you. I smile a lot more than my writes make it seem I do.
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Such powerful and beautiful images intertwined ineach line.....great job here.....smiles, Terry
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Thank you so much.
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this is a touching little piece here, so much said this so little, great job!!!! This is outstanding!!!
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Thank you so much. It means a lot that you took the time to read and comment. Thanks also for the applause.
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