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Lover

        Dear lover
                I think you found a way to break my heart today.
        I think you found a way to hurt me enough
                                  To make me bleed enough
            To break my heart today.

                                      You did it.


                                    You did it without remorse
                        Without thought.


                                        Thank you.
                                                  You broke my heart today.

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  • morgana raven
    February 5, 2007
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    you really havent been ok have yyou? you should have said something i like the length of this, its one of those things that doesnt have to be any longer to make an impact. great write again.
    laura xx