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She Smiles...

She smiles as the cold blood
drips over her closed fist.
The lie she lived
The emotions she couldn't feel
All led to this moment

She smiles as the cold blood
drips over her closed fist.
Not being able to escape
The wanting she hid from the world
Now show, bloody red,
as it slowly drips.

You could have saved her
but you looked away.
She laughs as the blood covers her fist
She smiles, What a beautiful smile

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  • MadisonRae
    March 13, 2007

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    A Tragedy

    but in a good way. Humans in general get picked up in the hustle and bustle of daily living and in our own lives that most forget there are others out there who are having a rough time. It's a sad state of affairs. "We must be the change we wish to see in the world". Famous quote by a person who was famous but i forgot the name lol. Great idea, great message.

    Madison


  • oh willoughby
    January 15, 2007
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    EMOTIONAL. RAW. INTENSE. DEEP.
    It has it!

  • Dove gold member
    January 15, 2007

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    Its too bad that people turn away in our times of need. Just one understanding person could make all the difference in the world. I like the poem it shows such raw emotion...Cotton