You kissed me so passionately
While holding my body
You ignited the flame
Awoke my senses, made me insane
A smooch I will keep
A kiss I planted on your lip
Haunted me in my dreams
You made my body scream…
For some more
Just a little kiss
I want to share again ~
With only “You”
You know I will always remember
How we shared it together
The sensual feeling it gave…
I felt like I was saved ~
From my deepest sleep
With just a short brush on your lip
Warmth my body and soul
I think I’ve started to fall…
In love with a stranger
I met that night
He shared me a kiss ~
That disturbed my tranquil nights
A Kiss that started all these fantasies
Endless dreams in bitter realities
I’m afraid it will never grow
That’s all I know
For you came to me in a wrong place and time
Then, vanished with just a blink of an eye
I’m missing you and your stolen kisses
Your stare that burns and your sweet caress
Author notes
"... All started ina kiss, then everything ended with a kiss"
option #10
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minimalist?
i likes the way it sounds
You kissed me so passionately
While holding my body
You ignited the flame
Awoke my senses, made me insane
A smooch I will keep
A kiss I planted on your lip
Haunted me in my dreams
You made my body scream…
amazing!
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A kiss...something so simple, yet it isn't simple at all. Thank you for this entry!
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Hot!
This poem was very hot, without being erotic at all. I loved it. The flow was great. I loved the raw emotion you could just see dripping from the page. Thanks for sharing. Love and Peace, Charlene -
good job
wel spoken piece of art I loved it such thought out words of passion great work -
For you came to me in a wrong place and time
Then, vanished with just a blink of an eye
I’m missing you and your stolen kisses
Your stare that burns and your sweet caress
I can see here a reference of the universal journey bringing a meaning to the love through the gifts of the kisses like new mornings which bring a meaning to the light... but every morning turns into the evening as well and this is also the truth of life and you have touched it so beautifuly my friend...bravo..great job
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Nicely done
nicely done my friend it is full of passion and emotion love and anger and a tiny bit of anger too. I will say one thing though, in some verses the rhyming sounds forced, but other than that it is a good poem, well done again my friend
raffles xx
p.s i have a saying for all poets and this is it, i believe that poetry is our gift to the world.... -
Nice write!
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Oh my gosh! This poem says alot about a person who craves intamicy! (sorry, my spelling sux). Bravo and thank you so much for that good write! It says alot of things that many cannot say...or dare to say.
All of God's blessings upon you always,
Amela -
Great
This poem is great, and i enjoyed it. I have been in a situation like this, and the thoughts that come after just a brush with a stranger can be just like that. you did a great job composing this, i really enjoyed it. keep up the GREAT work.
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IT's a very heartfelt and "cute" poem it's very romantic and very well written... keep up the good work because you seem to be a very talented writer..
I think i'm gonna check out your other works as well.
this part:
In love with a stranger
I met that night
He shared me a kiss ~
That disturbed my tranquil nights
was absolutly awesome...
keep it up of course.,
WIth much poetic love,
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I dont know what to say..it brings me back some old memories. And I know how you feel guessing the fact that you went through this, I know it hurts and maybe sometimes it kills, but yeah this one really hit me like a shotgun blast or some sort of something lol i dont know but anyways
I really like it. I really do. unlike the other two who didnt seem too thrilled but I wish you luck in the contest
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This is a lovely poem that you have penned here dear poet well done good luck in my contest
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I thought this was a really nice poem. The only thing I would say is that the words you have used are very deep and romantic, or at least that is the feel I got from it, and the word "smooch" just didnt seem to fit for me in the first verse. Maybe a word like "caress" would be more inkeeping with the overall tone of the piece? But that is just one tiny little thing, and all in all I thought it was a really great piece. Good luck in the contest.
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