VOLCANO
Volcano
Unpredictable, cruel
Erupting, flowing, devouring,
Fiery, slippery, destructive, heartless
Burning, melting, killing
Menace, murderous
Lava
JEREMY0826
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Fiery!
You have managed to pack an awful lot of imagery and power into this piece.
The shape is pretty much perfect, so well done for that, too!
I love how you have used the words to so much effect here. Each one is strong, and conjures up an image alone, and combined they are a potent mix indeed.
I especially liked the third line, there is just something about the words you have used there that make it really punchy and effective.
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Explosive imagery!
I've written a couple of poems about volcanoes. I will never forget the day that I witnessed the eruption of Mt. St. Helens on May 18th, 1980, in Washington State. I was 10 years old, and my dad was taking me to a Seattle Mariners game, when the freeway came to a halting stop. We saw this huge, slate-gray mushroom cloud. I remember asking my dad if we were being bombed.
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i love your poem it describes the volcano perfectly and so short but so long
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Exact
A volcano to a T. Great Job.
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Thank you!
Thank you very much Troyias! Glad you enjoyed "Volcano". Take care my friend!
Jeremy0826
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bravo
I love how you made such a short thing into something so big. It sometimes amazes me how some people can describe an enormous thing in such small words. AND SO WELL TOO. Great job!
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Thank you very much Ashley, glad that you enjoyed this piece!
Jeremy0826
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veyr good
as usual you have turned out another very good write
exelent work my friend perfect border!
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Thank you Honey Bear! I appreciate it.
Jeremy0826
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excellent!
The Diamante is a beautiful form...You have written this one with such intensity and wonderful imagery..Great poem, Jeremy!
Lynda
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Thank you so much!
Thanks a lot Lynda for your comments and applause! I am glad that you liked this one.
Jeremy0826
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