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Ocean-Diamante

OCEAN


Ocean
Serene, Beautiful
Soothing, Refreshing, Crashing,
Tranquil, Sandy, Mysterious, Dangerous
Rolling, Drowning, Hypnotizing
Inspirational, Tropical
Paradise


BY:  JEREMY0826
































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  • Knight70
    September 24, 2007

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    I love it!!!

    I'm inspired to write a diamante. I've never written one. I absolutely love to read and write about the sea, so the imagery this conveys is pure euphoria for me.


  • Poetic Aphrodite
    January 20, 2007
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    I adore the ocean, and you have done it poetic justice here, Bella


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    January 19, 2007
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    you are really on a roll my friend,
    this is really some thing else,
    and that's a very good thing.
    i must learn how to do this,
    this looks like fun.
    you make it seem so easy.
    but it probably won't be for me.
    i am loving your writes, great job.

    manyblessing2u
    your friend Joyce

  • HisBreathlessDream
    January 19, 2007

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    This is a beautiful petic description. The ocean is one of my favorite places to be. So soothing Thanks for the read.


    • Jeremy0826 gold member
      January 19, 2007
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      Thanks!

      Thank you very much Dream, I appreciate it!


      Jeremy0826
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