Needless and pointless,
With a motive that is wrong;
Construed and tangled
In a web whose tale is long.
Deceptively biting
At the morsels that are there.
But, in truth, just hiding
All the malice that they wear.
Author notes
hmmm...i just wonder. this Bible verse has a lot to do with it: 2 Timothy 2:14-19. some of you will know EXACTLY what i mean, and be able to pin point it down to the details. others, well, it speaks to a more general crowd also, just in a different way. oh, and the title is personal, hence the reason why it's probably confusing you right now
Please tell me what you think
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[this is what I can't say, but wish I could to tell you it was good]
Ok, I finally got around to commenting on this one…I was really happy with it, it drew on a different aspect then mine, and yours even had that awesome scriptural inspiration! You pretty much said it exactly how it was/is though, and you captured the emotion of the situation quite accurately…very good! I really liked the metaphors that you chose, the “biting” and morsels, they gave me the creeps, which was exactly what it should have done, since this ‘thing’ was quite creepy…awesome write!
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Oh....
Oh i get it! I think, i know what your talking about!
Yea i'm not lost know! I had to redo my comment, so sorry!
Good Job!
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