From the moment I wake till I close my eyes
I utterly hate those swift goodbyes
I hate the way they hope and judge
Your mistakes are not mine and this heart shall not budge
Do not think that I am the fool who leaps
Your right though in that this time I play for keeps
To the one who could make me change my ways
I promise to strive through the thickest of days
To the one who relit these eyes that burn
I make thee my thirst in which only I yurn
If the fire may die then be it at that and I will reluctantly move on
But untill that awefull thorn does strike I shall love him till forever be the day that dawns
Author notes
I thank Jeannie for this one. She helped to inspire it in her own little way.
A contest entry
- I want a new favie! (now allowing prewrites) by KarmasBlessing.
330 points, ended January 24, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think and if anything should be revised
Comments
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Great rhyme. The imagery is fab. Very vivid. I like alot
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candice, this was great! and youre welcome! youre a finalist!
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