STRAWBERRIES
Strawberries
Sweet, Delicious
Mouthwatering, Flowing, Indulging
Milkshakes, Pies, Sundaes, Chocolate
Tempting, Savoring, Dipping
Juicy, Springtime
Dessert
Author notes
Thank you for holding this contest! I hope you enjoy this piece.
In a list
A contest entry
- Flavors To Savor by Angel With No Halo.
450 points, ended January 30, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - STRAWBERRIES by ellipsist.
600 points, ended August 10, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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very well done!
I like this... tasteful, creative... not too wordy...
a wonderful job you've done here!
thanks for the entry - good luck!
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mmm. Now I am hungry. Great Job!
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This is cute... I love the flow actually... almost as if it was not meant to be the form it is in.. great job!! Thanks for entering sweety...
Good luck!! 
~Krys~
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delicous
Mmmm..and kisses that taste like strawberries
lovely..ok you have convinced me,i realy want a strawberry right now!
good luck in the contest with this very lovely write
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Mmmm. very mouth watering even though I'm allergic.
It has a very nice flow to it as well and it was really cute how you shaped your poem into a strawberry. -
Liked the shape of the piece you have written here - looks good too with all those desserts in those words. Interesting interpretation of this option in the contest.
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Not right now...
I'm supposed to be on my new years diet!!!!
Beautifully and engagingly sweet!!!!!!!!!!!
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