He was more than an average person
He changed our lives
He was a person everyone
could depend on
He didn't believe in segragation,
descrimination, or slavery too
He believed in equality
for everyone
He told everyone to love
their enemies but hate what they do
Author notes
This is an anonymous contest please don't say my name or username in the comments. Thank you
1. Honor our African-American Ancestors.
Please keep your comments G- Rated as I am only 11
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Wow, you have done a remarkable job to be 11. This is a very good tribute to Martin Luther. You honored him very well
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I liked the message you had in this. This was a wonderful tribute to an amazing man. Great write.
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I congratulate you for knowing what Martin Luther King, Jr. stood for. You are only 11 years old. That makes me proud! You keep doing what you're doing here dear poet. Bravo! Thank you for this entry and I wish you all the best in this tribute contest.
Martin would be proud!
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
*clappy
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Wow, love this!
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Well done, it is impressive that you are only eleven years old and have written this poetic tribute to Martin Luther King. Everyone who remembers him and what he stood for helps to keep his Dream alive.
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Only 11! Very impressive. I especially liked the line:
"He told everyone to love
their enemies but hate what they do"
That is so like the mind of Christ. A very mature line for an 11 year old.
Your poem is nice. Please read the instructions again though and make sure you follow all the steps.
One Love,
John
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this was a short poem that spoke volumes
wonderful write
thank you for your entery
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he was a very great man wonderful tribute
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This is so true
I love this poem. I am an American Indian so in history I know what it means to be a slave. This is very powerful poem and, I love the message within it.
I dedicated that poem "If I Were A Princess In A Castle" to your little girl. When I was a little girl I used to dream about being a princess.
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You are far too young to have known this pillar in our midst but it seems that somewhere, somehow his spirit graced your life. This is beautiful and your last line is true but we still mus pray for those who act hateful. Maybe our prayers will soften their hearts. A wonderful tribute to this giant of a man is written here little Poet. I am adding you to my favorites list along with your mom. God Bless!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Thank you for your entry
This says everything that he stood for and what he didn't. Thank you for sharing
Good flow and nice structure.
AS always I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy -
excellent
Very nice. Martin Luther King was all these things and more. He sounded an echo and left a legacy that is incomparable. Such inspirational courage and wisdom came from this young man and I don't think there will ever be someone as magnificent as he was. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
Brian
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