Cupped
Inside my hands,
An amazing miracle.
Honey, nectar, golden strands,
Delicacies of the heart
Swirling around like stars
Dancing in a whirlwind,
Radiantly beaming
Translucent,
Bursting
Into an oratorio
Of panoramic colors,
Dripping juices like
Ripe fruit.
Grasp
With your lips
Dip your tongue deeply in
Close your eyes and feel,
Taste the proffered
Embrace...
As time
Spins like a wheel
And passion grips your being,
Indulge within the core of life,
Inhale deeply.
Your lips
The flutter of your tongue
Moist cream slides
Riding the waves,
Meringue pie
Whipped and peaked
Tangy to taste
Flames surround like
Paraffin.
Burning sun
Melting
Down
Cool release of
May breeze calm
Those gentle lips
Your thirsty tongue
Make me weak,
Make me come.
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Written June 6th, 2003
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This is an amazing poem. I loved it! Thank you so much. Keep writing!
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That second to last stanza explodes in my mind like a fourth of July celebration ... you've certainly put your brilliant poetic talents on display ... incredible, I love the word selection ~ much respect, B
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That deep intake of breath is that one moment in time when all stands still for pleasure. The painted picture here in the piece did just that, made all stand still for the reading, to get caught up in and irrvocably lost on the waves of sensuality. Very sensual this piece, well done. Thanks for your comments, they are much appreciated.
-Angel aka WoundedAngel.
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shisters woman!!!
are your hands not aching and 10 times better??
judging by this piece, you never knew what pain was!
awesome horny toad piece!!
Tamara -
awesome,magical,unique,visual,poetic art in m
Awesome, Sprite--- This is senual,magical,enchanting,filled with very romantic clear images. Soft, calming, soothing to the inner spirit. While awakening a dormant body. The flow, content and presentations of the painted canvas are breath taking. This is one of the best poems, I have ever read. Your multi-colored background wraps this poetic gift into a beautiful package. You chose to sharing with us here at AP. Thank You, this was uplifting and very inspiring poem. It helped me connect to so many deep feelings locked up inside. This is some of the very BEST work, I have read by YOU! In my opinion, it is as close to perfection as any write can be. God Bless You... You really perked me up! Until, I can visit here again. I'm impressed, humbled and so much more. Style is so creative and very uniquely written. Things must be better 4 you??? I keep U in my prayers and think of you often!
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woah...raise your hand if you need a cold shower ...
i like the background, but it messes with my eyes a bit.
fabulous poem...intense, absolutely beautiful.
blessed be. -
Extremly sensual without being vulgar. Images displayed so well. Ihate to say I could 'taste' the imagery. Heh. Er. Yeah. Going to stop speaking now. Very vivid, and well done. I'm impessed.
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Joyce
Wow,Oh, My............. I'm at a loss for words...................
This was beyond sensual, Damn, and hubby's pissed at me, cause I'm being mean, pms, can't help it...............
I might have to go take a shower or wash dishes, anything, to take my mind off this!!!!!!!!!
Karen
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Ummmm.....okay, it's official. You SUCK!!!!!!! Of all the many splendid things I need right now, this is not one of them. Okay, well it is.....arrrrrrrghhhhhhhh ~ you know what I mean!!!!!!!
Sigh I miss this.
My personal feelings aside, this was a wonderful write.....built up to quite a climatic ending.
~~~~~ Sincerely, Janet ~~~~~
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wow this practially woke up with all the beautiful descriptions and imagery. it was like i could feel and touch everything you were saying. excellent, and well since im younger i feel sorta weird critiquing, but oh well. great piece thanks for sharing
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Yowsers!
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A lovely passionate romantic write Joyce this is lovely dear:)
Hugs my friend, Sherry -
not really sure what exactly it is you're holding in your hands, but i like the passion you've displayed here. some lovely, interesting imagery-- "radiantly beaming translucent": liked this a lot. could do with more of a focal point, but nice overall.
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Wow....
How long have you been writing?? This is VERY well done I enjoyed it alot... Thanks for sharing...
And I love the background, it really works with the poem...all though it was kind of hard to concentrate on the poem because of the white font... You should try making it a colour that's not bright but not dark... Try maybe purple or even pink... That should work nicely on the background, and it should be easier to read... But well done Keep up the good work.
*!$%$!*Kati*!$%$!*
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