She pulls back on the arrow,
and slings it at you.
I wonder what you're thinking,
when she looks at you.
I describe her in a different way
than just that.
And, since this is a different day,
I'll start at that.
I describe her to be aggressive,
and she's also beautiful.
She could have you in the palm
of her hands in one second.
Red hair and brown eyes
I know her from the skies.
I have something for you,
It's a big surprise.
This poem is going to end now,
now that you know that this girl
can pull an arrow towards you,
and it very well may stab you.
Author notes
I wrote this poem about: http://www.allmoviephoto.com/photo/2004_king_arthur_019.html
I wrote it just now but I wrote it about when I actually liked her about two years ago. I used to think she was cool, as well. I still think she's a good actress, though.
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i really like this one i especially liked the biginning. "She pulls back on the arrow,
and slings it at you.
I wonder what you're thinking,
when she looks at you." IDK why but i kinda got the image of cupid in my head when i read this. Her pulling her "love" arrow onto somebody. lol silly probably but thats what i thought. Great write..Keep it up.
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I love this poem. Yeah, Keira is good...whether I'd like to admit it or not...since I'm hardly into the modern stuff. You did her justice, man. Good luck in the contest.
then [than] just that -
Haha thats is really cool. Your really awesome.!
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She was great in Pride and Prejudice too..I just have one suggestion, and that's the beginning line; maybe just an idea, but you might change the tense of the word pull to pulls or pulled
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