Yet again you feel the rush,
The relief,
The high.
Feel okay as you slice,
When it drips.
You bleed, smile and fly.
Turn your head and hide,
From the noise, the words,
The lies they concieve.
They don't know, or just can't see,
The pain, the darkness,
The hate they breed.
So you run,
Hide and cry,
Bleed, just to erase the memories.
The darkness keep swirling,
You can't run like before,
And you get lost in the disease.
Words are silenced,
It ends and memories erase,
Death lines your coffin as they burry your disgrace.
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about pain, depression and the denial that makes it worse
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Wow Powerful!!
I think this is an excellent piece! My daughter writes about this as many of her friends (not her) have this terrible disease. You did an excellent job! and thankyou for sharing such an emotional subject. Semperfimom39
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WOOT WOOT!!!
the reality of depression never ceases to those who hold it. it makes it so hard that the dark can be so comforting and bid you to stay. within this poem you have expressed the reality and emotions of depression. congratulations
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yeah
Nice poem about self mutilation? Well that's how it read to me, someone hurting themselves to forget the mental pain---physical pain standing in its stead.
I guess it may make sense , hurt yourself so your pain overcomes you as long as it's pain of your own making...you forget the pain others cause you.
This is a good poem. Oh, at the end , tho, where you say it ends and memories erase---what do memories erase? Or did you mean , memories are erased? ...
I like the background and text colors ---fits the piece succinctly.
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This really hit home for me and is reminds me of one of mine I thought it was about something else though
great poem
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I forgot to applaud so here you go!
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Awesome Write!
This was an awesome write..I love the way you formated this and structure was totally different and unique! It added an amazing touch...your words were strong and powerful as well...I can really relate to this..keep writting your great at it!
keep writting
ya baby gurls
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Dark truth...
wow sis, this piece blew me away!
the flow was amazing and i liked your choice of words. this was a fierce and truthful insight to depression and how it fucks with you.
i hope things will turn around for you my love
take care
muwhz! xoxo
♥ Lynn
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AWESOME
wow tasha this was really good i know u didnt like it but i thought that it was awesome keeo up the great work,
U got mad skill and u obvioulsy know how to use it
great work
Krissy
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this was amazing. as i read this, i could feel my wrists tingle and could see the coffin drenched in pain and disgrace buried in the hard ground....wow..
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thank you for your comment and I'll returm the favor
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