You fake your smile, one more time...
You fake your smile, one more time...
When the world is at your door,
You simply stare at the floor,
Contemplating existence,
Seeing no resistance,
Life eats away your inside,
With no way to subside,
You fake your smile, one last time.
Face the new day, where is the purpose?
Adding on the stress, weighing you down.
Such good before you, inability.
Meaningless now, where is the purpose?
Contemplating existence,
Seeing no resistance,
You fake your smile, one more time.
The crowd ahead, doesn't understand.
They don't see, the hidden scars.
Comprehension, not their nature.
Could anyone, understand?
Isolation, and bitterness.
Encompass you, with no escape.
Desperately cry, broke by silence.
Leaves you feeling, this bitterness.
Contemplating existence,
Seeing no resistance,
Your fake smile is, no longer.
When the world is at your door,
You simply stare at the floor,
Contemplating existence,
Seeing no resistance,
Life eats away your inside,
With no way to subside,
Such desperation,
Leaves isolation,
Feeling no one understands,
I've been here too just take my hand,
Do not sacrifice,
Take your paradise,
Remember that you are not alone,
Open your eyes to see you're home.
And the world will, see your smile.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, Brett... This was quite touching and amazingly done I must say. And I will say it, and since I'm sitting right next to you it will be that much easier to say. Otherwise I might forget, thus that would make Nick a liar. And Nick wouldn't like to be thought a liar. Nick also likes to refer to himself in the 3rd person. Nick must admit that he doesn't know why, but it just seems to happen... sort of like an eclipse or something... anyways... oh yeah... btw, nice poem Brett.
*big smiley face here*
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WOW!
THIS IS AMAZING!!
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awesome write brett!!!
i can relate...make her smile
she deserves it
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see, you are very talented!! Even though it was depressing i think it's one of ur best pieces...very good job hun!! Keep on writin!!
~Nikki~
P.S. I love you!!
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awesome man...i really understood that..that was amazing...i can really relate to this...very nice..
YuS
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, I LOVE this poem Brett!!!!! It's so sad, and then the ending picks you up. Awwwww, very nice!!!
~Katie~
P.S. 2nd stanza, change "on" to "one". K, I'm done!
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