Have you perhaps heard of my home, the gold-laced shield that stands,
Beyond all human eyes and minds, beyond all Nature’s lands?
Have you seen my Light of Hope, the Unicorn am I
Waiting for dragon Strength to return with swift reply?
Is it known that Strength is gazing far across your world,
Searching for the time when his grand secret is unfurled?
Can you see that humans all are part of his grand mission?
That locked inside of each of you is truly Man's ambition?
Are you aware that ruby Strength left me alone, behind,
Despite our amazing power when both we are combined?
Do you know we belong to humans as their natural defence,
Yet they have abandoned us, at Mankind’s own expense?
Have you heard that you have lost the opal eye, my friend?
Can you not see that you are sowing the seeds of your own end?
Do you see that mighty Strength, who you replaced with Pride,
Abusing it to inflict pain on others, ignoring Strength inside?
Can you see the horror that you have brought upon your race?
Will he find the messenger he seeks within this wicked place?
Author notes
Power is necessary. I have written a question poem.
It is the genre Fantasy, on Hope.
Me and Lady-Pegasus are the group Unicorn.
A unicorn,
Ignorant of what is to come,
Enveloped in beautiful, silvery velvet,
Prancing in flawless forest,
Shielded from reality...
Extinct.
(21 words, I think)
Lovely!
Lady-Pegasus' poem is here:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2551532
A contest entry
- ~~~QUEST FOR POWER 3(Round 2)~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended February 26, 2007, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Way to go!!!
This one rox!! The take is so unique..intrestingly put that wants the reader to keep reading!! IT takes time to digest what ur saying!! The flow of the poem is so nice..the questions so creatively framed...love this work a lot!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
preets
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Awsome job. great flow and rythme. i loved reading it. it just slid off the tounge very nicley. Awsome job.
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Amazing job... The flow, and rhyming were done very Impresivley. The message in this poem is strong and deep, hence the name of the poem. Amazing job here!
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I think you did splendid job, partner, on both poems! Thank you for this excellent chance to work with you and find yet another great writer here! Best of luck to you in this and all of your contests!! -
u forgot to add the link to the poetry of ur group mate...anyways do that
Will be back to comment..
Thanks for entering and good luck
preets
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