Would I turn back time for you?
Would I sit and cry with you?
Would I wanna watch the sky with you?
I wish you where here
I wish my dreams had came true
I wish you knew what I knew
But I can't change what has happened
What we call this love of ours
Should I say my truths?
And become straight with you?
Is this really an never ending love?
Or am I confused
I need assistance
With my issues with you.
I wanna dream the same dream
And touch the same touch
And breathe the same breath
I wish you were here
Our times may be diffrent
But I still seem to care
You broke my heart
And tore away everything
But I seem to still care for you
A broken down gasp of pethetic love for you
A gipped and chipped dimond of craving for your lust
I wish you were here
By my side
So I couldnt care
I wish I could change the past
I wish I could wish a perfect wish.
Our lives are diffrent
Our thoughts are diffrent
But our love is for eachother
And we wish it wasnt there.
This is our Neverending Love
A true story of faith
A wishful thought from a lonely heart
And a gasp of wasted air.
One more time I will wish on the star
That falls from the deep blue skies
...I wish you were here....
Author notes
A true story, a battle of love between ex friends
In a list
A contest entry
- Broken, Happy, Anger, Party! by Dusted Wings.
300 points, ended January 31, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awesome
This poem is just AWESOME. if that is not the word, then I'd need to find a far better word to describe this. Why.. its been just soooo deep.. DEEPER.. I lvoe this. I sincerely wish, may all your wishes come true and dreams seen and prayers answered
Very w ell written.. Truly poetic and absolute perfection..
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..speechless..
..Wow. You did an...OUTSTANDING job! My mouth dropped. You did a very very Great Job! I read it over an over. Even though I wish it had a background, the picture made it worth whie. Your poem inspired me, you talked about lost love, broken thoughts and chipped damage. You did the most fantastic Job I have seen so far. I love you for writing this piece.
BRAVO!!!!!! *stands up and claps* You did great. Good Luck!! And Take Care!
Nami
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Well Thank you soo much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Take care too you too.
Rene
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