Flow for me,
my dearest water.
Sing for me,
my dearest birds.
Let your presence
cover me.
Take me away
to your inmost being.
Whatever may happens,
let me flow and sing with you.
Author notes
let me know what's wrong with my poem. thank you very much! ;D
I wrote this when I was beside the Laguna river early very morning.
Comments
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did you mean to say happens
i do this too
this was a wonderful write

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flowing and singing down the path of life...beautiful Grandia...leaves wonderful images in my mind




