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By The Laguna River

Flow for me,
my dearest water.
Sing for me,
my dearest birds.

Let your presence
cover me.
Take me away
to your inmost being.

Whatever may happens,
let me flow and sing with you.

Author notes

let me know what's wrong with my poem. thank you very much! ;D

I wrote this when I was beside the Laguna river early very morning.

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  • raggyann
    September 28, 2007
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    did you mean to say happens
    i do this too
    this was a wonderful write


  • SandTrisha
    September 28, 2007

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    flowing and singing down the path of life...beautiful Grandia...leaves wonderful images in my mind