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Starlight Mint Surprise



Mint chocolate wafers,
encased in cookie dough.
Best right out of the oven,
soft, warm and melted don't ya know

Grandma would bake them for us,
a Christmas time special treat.
While icing sugar cookies,
we couldn't help but eat.

Grandpa taught us how to eat them,
before they were put away.
"Oops, broke another!"
chomping away he would say.

They are called by this name,
of Starlight Mint Surprise.
Always the first to be gone,
seeing them put a sparkle in my eyes.

Starlight Mint Surprise,
are my favorite cookie.
When eating them HOT!
Burn yourself and be the cookie rookie!

Author notes

"I'm a cookie monster too!"

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  • PoetryPuppy
    January 29, 2007
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    I am hungry thank you for your poem, Kiarna xxxx

    • Grey Mouser
      February 2, 2007
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      Thank you very much Kiarna for the opportunity to revisit some very wonderful memories and to enjoy writing about them. Loved the contest and am honored to win a silver trophy here.
      Mouser

  • Pixie Stix
    January 26, 2007

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    HAPPY!

    This is an amzing poem! it makes me laugh. My Grandpa does the same thing, and so does my dad. I want a cookie now... Thank you for writting this poem! it made my day!


    • Grey Mouser
      February 2, 2007
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      Thank you Pixie. Glad that you enjoyed my cookie treat. So much we learn from our grandparents and parents that we seem to appreciate much later on in life.
      Mouser

  • eyesofanangel524
    January 26, 2007

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    Sounds so yummy. Can I have a cookie please? You have captured the contest so well. Cookie monsters we are. YOu have tempted our tastebuds and left our lips smacking. Best of luck to you.


    • Grey Mouser
      February 2, 2007
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      Hehehe, Dawn that was the attempt, thanks for the great comment. If we ever find the wafers again will surely send some. Though you will have to have your own milk.
      Mouser

  • JeannieD Hunter silver member
    January 26, 2007

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    Yummy! Bake us up a batch!! What a wonderful memory to go with them. Pass the milk please! Great job. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


    • Grey Mouser
      February 2, 2007
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      Thanks Jeannie! They are very tasty and we are actually having trouble finding the mint wafers anymore so we had to go without this year. So sad. Had to make do with my second favorite Molasses cookies.
      Mouser

  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 26, 2007

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    I love this It's great and a really enjoyable read. I like the sound of those cookies. I know Kiarna will love this
    My best to you in this contest.
    Gaylene


    • Grey Mouser
      February 2, 2007
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      Thank you very much Gaylene! Really appreciate the great comment, your time in reading and the applause.
      Mouser
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