In your eyes
All you see is a slut
who goes around with whoever she wants
never fearing the consequences
never thinking of what could come next
she knows shes just the slut
never to be worthy
never to be whole
needing the money
to make herself free
but thinking to herself this isn't me
always on her knees
for that quick buck
Inside shes just searching for something
to fade away the pain
but everyday its all the same
In your eyes
All you see is a druggie
searching for her next score
doing whatever she can
one more hit then
whoa there she goes again
this is now in control
her addiction is all she thinks about
night after night praying for a way out
escatcy, speed, weed
just one more hit is all i need
Inside shes just looking for something
to fade away the pain
but everyday its always the same
In your eyes
all you see is those cuts
but never think about why they are there
she cuts so deep
you can see the bone
but you dont care what she feels
nobody can save her from herself
nobody can make her stop
inside shes just looking for something
that will fade away the pain
but everyday its all the same
Please tell me what you think
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*pouting*
I love this poem, so much emotion. I understand, but in a different way. I use to be an anorexic so I thought of my self as a whore all the time. I would take pills and starve myself, this went on for a year until I met my special someone. I use to also be addicted to pain medicine and ciggarettes because I loved the euphoria, I'm still trying to quit smoking after just 7 months.
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great write i understand it so much because i use to cut myself i still do at times but i found someone that makes me happy and not want to and with drugs i have been going through that myself once again great write
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Awesome poem... very real, like the emotion in it. you can see the pain and hurt of the girl
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Great write!! i love the expression and realness of it. i understand what you are saying, i am a cutter, and no matter how hard i try, i jsut can't stop. you did an excellent job ob this piece!
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This is poem is truly awesome. I am a cutter myself... so seeing someone else express exactly what I feel truly is amazing.
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Very good.. and very deep, lots of emotion.
Reminds me of some people I know.
Great Write
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