He wont stop moving or making that noise
It is more than aggrivating
Stop it! I can not bare it any longer!
Make that aweful noise go away
She is gone now and I can still hear him
Maybe I should hack him up into a billion pieces
Or maybe I should cut out his eyes and tongue
Wait, I hear something
Oh no! She is coming back, slowly
She knows I am thinking bad things
Mommy always knows when I am eager to do bad
But he will not stop for anything
I can tell her that
Mommy will understand
She always understands
That is wonderful, she can help me
The noise is bad for mommy's ears too
It will be so much fun
She did say something about baking cookies
I love red cookies but hate food coloring
She knows that but tells me it is all she has
Now Mommy can have something else
I will give it to her
We can have red cookies and that noise will go away
Her voice is so sweet in my ears
When she whispers for me to go get daddy's drill
Finally this noise will end
I will have so much fun taking it from my brother
Mommy will too
Because we will have red cookies today
And we have something besides food coloring
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Grammar/spellcheck: 'won't' for 'wont', 'aggravating' for 'aggrivating', 'awful' for 'aweful'.
Like Wednesday Addams dealing with an obnoxious guest, but it's closer in, a family matter. Real crimes arise from such unbearable obtuse persistence. A stroke of genius envisioning this source of food coloring.
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I agree that you did this option well... This is horrible, considering the way the girl talks she doesn't appear to be much older than 4 or 5 years old... and with all that of blood as food colouring... Oh yes, very disturbing indeed.
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