I WILL REMEMBER YOU...
Sounds creepy doesn't it?
Kinda like a threat long overdue.
I'M CREATIVE YOU CAN'T EXPECT ME TO BE NEAT TOO!
Kinda random... but true, oh, and I have to admit,
I WILL REMEMBER YOU...
Oh, and just some advice for you...
JUST PRETEND TO DO IT!!!!!
Kinda like a threat long overdue.
My favorite color is blue...
TOTALLY MINDLESS FREE SPIRIT!!!!!!
I WILL REMEMBER YOU...
Sorry, this poem type is kinda new...
Do this much longer and I might have a fit...
Kinda like a threat long overdue.
I must apologive to you,
If this poem really bit.
I WILL REMEMBER YOU...
Kinda like a threat long overdue.
Author notes
I wrote this villanelle for a contest, so forgive me if it sounds insane. I guess you could see it would be kinda weird from the title... Oh, and by the way the capitalized lines are from the blinkies!!!!
A contest entry
- The Blinkie Poem Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended February 18, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ehem! by Warrior-Eagle.
300 points, ended December 10, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awwww it's so sweet and touching, very simple and from the heart of yours, it makes it more amazing...
Just like a song, cute and catchy melodies and lyrics
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Very impressive. Amazingly well written and anyone who reads this will remember you! Good luck
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well now I see you have impressed the host
wonderful job and great usage of the blinkies
very creative indeed.. clapping.
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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Thanks...
Wow... Thank you. I didn't think it was that good, but everybody else seems to like it. Thank you everybody for your nice comments, and especially for your applause. ^^
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Yeah, a villanelle of blinkies!
What a great job you did with it too!
Oh, and just some advice for you...
JUST PRETEND TO DO IT!!!!!
Kinda like a threat long overdue.
Ha-I liked this stanza! I think I will try that at school on Monday................LOL
Good luck, this was great!
Susie
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too, Crystal. You've done me and yourself proud by this entry--Not only were you inspired to learn a new form of poetry, but you've written your very first villanelle and I'm honored that you posted it to this contest!A 25-Bonus Reward is on its way to you for this accomplishment, and I wish that I had a High-Five Blinkie that I could pass on to you as well! Thank you for this great entry to the contest!Jo
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Yippee!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! I'm happy that you liked it. It is now my goal to make a villanelle that actually makes SENSE. Lol. ^^ (Sorry if my enthusiasm bothers you... -_-')
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