When time stands still everything pauses except us.
For one moment no one exists but the two of us.
I share the air that you breathe.
You blow it out and it enters me.
Making my life with you so complete.
The balance between us is non yielding,
Nor does it tilt.
We are fashioned and forged,
From innocense and guilt.
You are my woman and I love you deep
I ache to be in your arms,
And crave you in my sleep.
I cherish you to the way that I breathe life.
Without the utterance of words, spoken or written
I am afflicted with love by all that is you.
You are my woman and you balance me strong
I am connected to you
Even when we fuss and fight
In your smile I lose my frown
You raise me up when my emotions are down.
Essence of perfection
You are my world
And my every heartbeat
Touched by your love
My soul has been kissed
And now I know that
I have found she whom
Was destined to love me
As I bow before you my Queen
I am flattered to even be in your presence
But now I must ask you more than something
Let your heart unfurl and take me there
A place where the sound of your breath is my music
and every part of your body is my piano key
As we both know life is full of stress
The roller coaster rides from east to west
Let me massage your spirit with wisdom
Until you and I are molded into one
As I take the ring and place into your finger
Look not back at yesterday for I am your future
The man who will love you and nourish you with happinesss
and who will respond to any of your request
God blessed the day you found me
The angels sung the day I found you
I am convinced we were meant to be
I'm tearing, sgghhss, hummmm
right now I am so scared
WIll YOU MARRY ME?
A contest entry
- What You'd Give For Love by DarknessOfSanity.
900 points, ended July 4, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Castle Of Dreams. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 12, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Thank you for your most beautiful and captivating entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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beautiful write, a great way to tell someone you want to marry them!!
thanks for entering and good luck -
Absolutely adorable!
It's such a great way to ask someone to marry you! It was really well written, and I loved it! I hope she says yes, btw. Anyways, fantastic job! Showed great emotion and everything, it was just all around well done! Thanks for entering -good luck! -
This piece was full of love and extremely awesome great write!
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What a simply stunning poem about your love!!! I can see that you really do have something to be thankful for. I'm really glad you posted in my contest. I wish you the best of luck in it. Cathy
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wow this was great I loved it I liked the 3rd stanza alot and love how you end it this was very beautiful great job and best of luck
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this was awesome so full of love great job good luck
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Amazing
Great Job on this poem. This poem had a good flow to it and I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing this poem. I wish you luck in this contest.
Nikki
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