Im still the frist you tell
important things to.
But why me,
Im never any help.
You come to me for reconsile.
"Can I tell you something?,
I think Im pregnant."
Silence.
Im so sorry I have no wise words.
"Are you sure?"
is all i can force out.
I dont know what to say.
Its been a month atleast
since we last talked.
Why me,
I cant help...
I wish I had some advice,
or i could tell you itll be okay.
I wish I could say
"Your gunna be a mommy!"
I cant.
Its impossible to immagine
giving up a baby.
I cry even thinking of you doing so.
Even with your juvinile ways,
and the mistakes youve made,
the mistakes you will continue to make,
You still deserve to keep it.
Author notes
sucky poem im sure, but i cant tell anyone about it. i had to get it out somehow. my old best friend who i havent talked to much since i moved just told me shes preegnant. i have no reconsile for her, i wish i did. i wish i could hold her and tell her its all gunna be okay...when she tells her mom, shes eitherr gunna have to drop out of highschool, or give it up for adoption. i cant bare the thought of her going through anymore pain than she already has been through...and im pretty sure the notes are longer than the poem itself. but i just cant get out what i feel in a poetic form...or really any form at all.
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i feel this completely skips over the real emotions that would be felt at such a terrible moment as finding out your pregnent so young. i have trouble reading through this poem as you make many spelling mistakes - its pregnant not [preegnant] so before you start spell checking my poems have a look at your own!!
this poem is a stereotypical answer to the teenage pregnancy and doesnt explore any new ideas of your own! -
well, it is great. Being pregnantat 15 must be a hard thing to deal with. If she gets an abortion, she will never forget killing her child. But dropping out of school, is bad to. great job
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I think you got it out well enough. It's very difficult to advise or console when someone drops a bombshell. Same thing happened to my cousin. I hope everything turns out okay. X
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