Nothing has become clear,
But they said it would.
It is because I cannot believe.
It isn’t there, so I never could.
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"Good Times"
A contest entry
- Short by Bryan K Johnson.
900 points, ended February 2, 2007, 33 entries
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We often cannot believe in that which is not seen, but my opinion is this - I cannot see the air I breath but I am breathing, I cannot see the love shared but I can feel it - thus just because I cannot see it only means that it may be far to important to have a shape or form and just is.
Nice thought provoking piece you have written.
Let the ink flow and your fingers dance
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hehe, nice interpretation.. thankyou for reading and the lovely comment.
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Interesting short peice. Could be so manny things. The easiest to relate it to is religon, but its not limited to that. For the sake of freedom with your writing, I won't talk about religon here. I don't really sence any pain, just solid resolve. The kind of resolve that people base their entire life around. Another interesting thing is that you use the word 'they' instaid of 'you'. Like even though you have been told by many, you stand firm. I see power in this.
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Thankyou kindly.
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I love that it could have so many different meanings what an awesome write makes me wonder what it is specifically you were refering to
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You know what, I wish I knew what I was refering to.
Thankyou kindly =)
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I love it the perfectly written piece of work and the writer doesnt even know what it was in reference too thats awesome
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haha, thats a random mind that can place words rather neatly..
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