TRUST IN OUR FRIENDSHIP
Take my hand and know
I will support you always
Trust in our friendship
In a list
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
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it is so sweet friends are very important even now
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This can be used as more than just bosom pals, but also as friendship between a husband and wife. I like this...you should definitely do more haikus.
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Thanks a lot Phantom, I appreciate it!
Jeremy0826
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Beautiful spiritual senryu, Jeremy!
This is exquisite work. I love to write both haiku and senryu. The ability to capture moments is never easy, so it's quite amazing when what you strive for with so few words is accomplished. This rises into the divine of He who holds you so dear to His heart.
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I really enjoyed this senryu.
I love to read and write haiku/senryu. Over half of the poems I have are haiku. I really enjoyed the spiritual conversation between God and his children. Very well done, Jeremy!
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very well done. i admire those who can say so little in so few words, especially with such a complex subject. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you very much my dear friend, I appreciate it!
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Beautiful,
I myself enjoy all forms, most of them anyways...This was a sweet delight to read, for once again your heart shines through, and offers a helping hand and heart of friendship. Worded simply beautiful, bravo~
Peace, your bro, Timothy
aka poeticweaver~
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ahLiked the sentimenets you have expressed in these lines - very true these ideas you share in these three lines - think all poets should try haiku and get a feel of this from of poetry - not as easy as it looks.
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awww
I like this a lot becuase its something that is Beautiful and ture. I will support you always
Trust in our friendship. good work
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was soooooooooo good!!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece!! I also really Loved the font you used!!! this piece was soooo emotional! great write! thank you soooooooo much for entering!!!! excellent work and the best of luck in my contest!!!!
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A well done poem. This is what I like about haiku, short yet great. Thanks for sharing.
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This is so well done, there is nothing more than te love of a friend.... well done on this haiku
I thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and wish you the very best of luck
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Not fond of the haiku form... it is not expressive enough for me.. this is a sweet sentiment though. Good job
~Krys~
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Beautiful. I love how you turned this from haiku to wonderful expression of friendship. Great job on this and good luck!
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This poem holds a lovely amount of depth and feeling - a very poetic topic you've chosen. However, I think that perhaps more imagery and descriptions could have been added to create a more powerful piece. Good luck in the contest!
DancingRed.
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Beautiful and genuine
Great Job.*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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I do love green eggs and ham as well and found this quite interesting. I really liked it though perfect haiku
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This proves that it takes only a few words to say a lot. Well done, and best of luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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this is simply the best.
i tried to write one of these many time, and i fail each time.
you have done well with this. you completely amaze me at times.
this is the perfect write my frind.
i love the message within excellent job my friend
manyblessings2u
joyce
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There's so much love in this sweet little message. Trust is such a valuable thing in friendships, some people who have been hurt in the past have trouble trusting though but a loyal honest friend can help restore that trust.
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