fdirens are hrad to cmoe by
smoe are siltl at my sdie
nveer had a bset fdiren
npoe nveer had one
sineeg orhets tleinlg streces
wideronng waht tehy cluod be auobt
hipnog smoe wree rgeerts
taht way it wloud reelive the sserts
I had fdirens taht wree greils
but mstoly I ran wtih the byos
My betrohr & his fdirens let me jion in:
Citachng nhigt crewlars
gniog finishg, it was so mcuh fun
All tehm temis in the sun.
Hdie-n-seek oitsude in the drak
was aslo to mcuh fun
Rmebeemr cpos & rebbors, all my gedoodnss taht was way bcak when?
Gniworg up I'm srue I thguoht I had a bset fdiren,
but wehn soochl eendd, we all wnet our own wyas.
Uitnl one day two of my fdirens cmae bcak itno my lfie.
Taht is wehn I rizleaed, tehy are my bset of fdirens and I slouhd hvae kownn beettr to say I had nnoe.
Now I hvae you Kimerlby and yuor teruly a knid, fnuny,and criang bset fdiren taht one cluod hvae!
Yuor the one taht I can say, I wlil keep for the rset of our leifs.
A contest entry
- Mxeid Wrdos - Our Amzanig Mndis by Fairy Nutty Buddy.
600 points, ended February 24, 2007, 6 entries
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Comments
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This was a very neat idea for a poem & you did a great job pulling it off as well!
Good luck!
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Great job, after it took me an hour to figure it out, after working 10 1/2 hrs straight my brain is a little fuzzy! haha..Lovez.
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I think my mind is going buggy from all these mixed up words... what in the world did I do? HAHAHA!
What a sweet poem, made me think of days when I was younger, also hanging with the boys more than the girls, going up the pond and catching salamanders, water ballon fights, Fourth of July fireworks, helping my parents paint the house and then painting each other... haha!
I'm laughing at myself, the last line I read "the rest of my lifes" instead of "our" and was thinking about the past lives we may have had together... haha! Last word should be leivs, though, more than one.
Sweet, sweet, sweet!
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LOLOL I can read it!! that's crazy!!!! and thats a very good poem!!! Great job Amanda!
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