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Whipits On Shrooms (Senryu)

each can be magic
together out of this world
- visit with the Gods



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Written June 27th, 2003

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  • MissHapps
    May 13, 2004
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    ...and ask them "What in the heck were you thinking"?!?
    Which came first- the acid or the trip?
    oooohhhh mmyyyyy gaaawwwwdd!!!!
    Their TAILS!!! I'd still be wetting myself!!!

  • April 9, 2004
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    Cute. If that's the right word. Not sure...

  • UncleSpace
    April 8, 2004
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    Thanx!

    Thank you so much for the nice and cool comments and for reading this a couple times. Nice job on the contest!

    USpace

  • isa
    April 8, 2004
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    Not exactly what i was looking for, but thank youfor entering anyway! its a great poem...i never did shrooms heh, but ive heard so much about them from my friends....
    -Isa
  • KayMMIV
    April 7, 2004
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    nice, i like

  • isa
    April 3, 2004
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    yay..no ones written i hiku for this contest yet. kudos to you! thankyou for entering.. ive neve done shrooms, so i can t say much about that, but yeah great write. thanks again
    -Isa
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