A birth of the moon's reflection,
of the sun's warm, eternal kisses
a creation of natures perfection,
born of the hearts sweetest wishes.
Stalwart beauty of the oceans,
merely intriguing dreams
bewitching the deepest of emotions,
a gelid soul, she redeems.
She surrenders your fears to the tide,
washes away the smog of doubt
to be sustained by the oceans reside,
of the depths we shall be stout.
In a mermaids cradled dream,
gently flowing in the ocean breeze
shining within a moon beam,
guiding us through the underseas.
To glimpse a crystal paradise,
where nightmares are washed away
her freedom does entice,
ridding us of invigorating disarray.
Maiden of the deep mystical sea,
of the ebb and flow of the tide
so spellbinding, wild and free,
beyond the crystal surface, she'll reside.
A child of the skie's complextion,
born of a hearts sweetest wishes
of the moon's obscured perfection,
of the sun's warm, eternal kisses.
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
- INSPIRE ME!!! by Glass Heart.
435 points, ended May 13, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this! It was so pretty. I'm definitely bookmarking it. Keep writing!
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this sounded like more of a song to me than a poem. I really liked it though, it's definately going to my bookmarks ^^
Keep writing
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That is amazing! I love the ryhme and rythme of this poem. I think that the most amazing lines are 'Of the moon's obscured perfection/of the sun's warm, eternal kisses.' Such a happy-making write. Congratulations, you are on the finalists list.
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that'a a mermaid alright! This was a good discription with feeling. best wishes in the contest
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beautiful, wonderfully rhymed
lucy
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This is pretty good. The imagery used is amazing. Great write, a little cliche, but very nice.
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This is wonderful!
I loved it!
Your word choice and rhyme are excellent.
The images you painted and better than any picture a person could paint with a brush or pencil and colours.
Keep on writing, and good luck in the contest.
Nooni
. Rewarded 4
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This was very soulful I thought and my favourite part is
Maiden of the deep mystical sea,
of the ebb and flow of the tide
so spellbinding, wild and free,
beyond the crystal surface, she'll reside.
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