Something greater then me wont let this feeling go,
internally terrified as each day grows,
deepened ecstasy of passion flamed chemistry en-lights,
melting dripping from the glistering candles warmth tonight,
Let our bodies join, savour a moment together,
feel emotions pulsate so deep within enjoy our endeavour,
I feel a soul-bewitching into wondrous confusion,
Is love real any-way or a translated illusion.
I gaze paused into the sacred art of passion's first kiss,
A powerful force behind us, I cant explain this inner bliss,
making this empowered chemistry explode,
like volcanic rain, lava forming the hottest probe.
Shall I hold back from the mysterious soul unknown,
when emotions are all we have to own,
true to say reality will kick in tomorrow,
hold your head high, I'm just easing a little sorrow.
My heart wishes I could have you forever,
lavishing beneath my satin sheets together,
though I am not one to hold onto a dream,
for somethings arn't always what they seem.
Alone with you, my heart feels pure my soul error free,
forever loving you in my daydreams....secretly.
I fear hearing you saying good-bye,
like many fearing the blackened midnight sky,
reach to the thunderous clouds, soak me in your rain,
like a powerful force behind us we cant explain,
making this empowered chemistry explode,
as when lightening hits sand a beautiful glass object glows.
I want your burning fire,
lavish me in creams desire,
let me drink from your love potion,
move in me with full emotion.
As my body falls light,
glide me down onto my knees tonight,
I whisper in silent prayer........
Thank-You for this moment,
I shall cherish forever,
just this one chance to love him,
Is worth the pain of knowing.....
he can never be mine.
Amen...
Now lets rest in the music of our heartbeat,
within the silence of my breath.
Author notes
This piece is dedicated to a close friend.
thank-you for the memories.
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You worded your inner conflict ...
and the realization that passion cannot bridge the facts of separation. Of course the implied truth is that in "real life" even a passionate start may turn to dust ... and that dreams are often interludes "easing a little sorrow".
All the best to you in this contest and thank you for reading my work.
Love
Myra
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thank-you myra for your lovely comment
take-care
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I think this poem is absolutely brilliant. You're an amazing writer as the previous posters have stated. You have done a marvelous job with this poem. The imagery is absolutely perfect and breath taking. It sent chills running through my body. Good work with this and I hope you win the contest.
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thank-you
thanx joel I wrote this piece a few months ago it was written from real life experiences one of my favorite poems take-care from tracey
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Very Good Work
This is a very powerful write, to say the least. I enjoyed reading from start to finish. They're are some parts that can use a little tweeking, but as far as I amn concerned, it fits the mood your conveying. Thank you for sharing your passion with us all. -
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thank-you so much yer this poem was written straight from my heart.
take-care
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breath taking
i have always liked your work
you capture such a huge world
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Oh wow girl, this is truly beautiful. A hint of sadness always accompany a write of love that one cannot have. It must be one of the sadest things ever, but hey, there will always be a reason for that.
This was well written and so sensual, sexy and just great!!!
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Nanette
thank-you so much for reading and your kind comment.yes it's hard when a guy chases you like mad but his married...hmmm yer well I made it clear married men are not on my menu..lol..
but its sad we got along great good friends.
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very well done
Wow a very heart felt read here. The line “Is love real any-way or a translated illusion. I think love is very much just an illusion for many. Many are out there
just for looking to get ahead .
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alwaysright
thank-you very much take-care
from tracey
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And at that i am left speechless, this is so amazing the imagery and metaphores were magnificant, Beautiful!
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DynamicSound
You are very kind thank-You I love your work forever write for emotions are all we have....
take-care from Tracey.
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Fantastic, Wonderful, Amazing!!!!!!
You are so amazing at what u do. like i alwyas tell u... just love the way you use your words... would love to be able to write half as good at you... can't wait to have my personally signed copy lol of your book sitting proudly on my self... love always terrilee xoxo... P.s thanku for your incouragement to keep on writing take care...
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buffy02
Thank-You so very much like I say writing is the best therapy and it's free..lol..
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Moly!
Wow! There's so much weight to this. You've expressed so much... things we're scared to say, ashamed to admit... facts of life and human nature that course through all our veins. The message is clear as blown glass... we all want affection, attention, passion... love. How we get there and what we do with it... well you said it so much better already. Beautiful poem... strikingly
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Poems from the Pit
Thank-You so much kj.
Say hello to Canada for me
from Tracey.
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