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Friends?

I smile, laugh and act happy,
But then I see you and want to cry.
So much for a best friend,
All that means is it hurts more.

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Quite poor really but I thought i'd enter.

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  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    May 23

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    it's always sucks when a relationship we had with someone, especially a best friend, goes sour. in such a short length, you conveyed emotion very well.


  • Lj-
    May 27, 2007
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    This is a contest for seven lines exactly. This consists of four.

    Thank you for entering.