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Paper Bag

Looking on this windy day
I see a paper bag floating,
Beautiful in the sky,
Trying to be free
from this confinment,
Innocence now gone,
Deprived of its use,
Crumpled and wasted,
And why ?
Those reasons mush forgotten,
Only met in sadness,
Where it was once was needed,
But now rejected,
And to never give up,
Fighting to stay,
Having a purpose,
Waiting to be wanted,
To be filled
once more,
But how ?
At the moment of being discarded,
One picks it up,
Recycles it,
And now it starts a new life.

Aug. 1, 2000

By: B.E. Whitehorn & Ardennia Cooper

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Written January 10th, 2002

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  • Trnzprnt Nigma Slcd
    November 11, 2006
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    I quite like it, my dear...

  • sidewinder silver member
    January 15, 2002
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    No problem !!!
    Glad you enjoyed the write !

  • Rodney
    January 15, 2002
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    Really cool. Being recycled is like being reincarnated.
    Cool write Sidewinder. Thanx.

  • sidewinder silver member
    January 11, 2002
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    Thank you Pandora !
    I'm glad you enjoyed the piece !

  • January 11, 2002
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    i feel just like that paper bag ;( i like the poem alot, its very easy going and sad in its own way...

  • sidewinder silver member
    January 10, 2002
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    Thanks Shadow Of Saturn!
    I agree !!!
  • shadows of saturn
    January 10, 2002
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    hehehehe nice poem!!!! simplicity sometimes is the best :)
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