Everyday you tell me
I should be like you
But why should I?
Because I DON'T LIKE YOU!
You think you're better
But you're not!
No one wants to be
Like a cheating liar!
Just tell me this much
Why should I be like you?
Because you're prettier? NAH!
Because you're smarter? NAH!
Because you think you're
All THAT? NO WAY!
Just get this through
Your head now sweetie...
I'm not like you!
I never will be!
so give it up!
I'LL NEVER BE LIKE YOU!
Author notes
had to get that off my chest! lol.
Please tell me what you think
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WOW! That's telling her
Well written and a powerful write. I am sure the one you wrote about has got the message. -
kick ass
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Well you got your point across in a strong manner but the thing is now to move on and forget her... keep the good and throw the old rubbish out and forget about it. Strong write well executed,
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I like it!
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Within us all lies difference
Yes thank God we are all different for if we were all alike what a boreing place it would be
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hell yea tell em
i love how this was put iv been thare done that smake a which lol i loved it -
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STICK IT TO HE MAN!! =]
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And im glad your not.. it's nver god to be like someone else.. be yourself.. it'll get you farther hun... good work
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Good for you
We are who we are each one different. I'd rather be myself than anyone else. Your words are clear and strong.
Smile,
Judy
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GREAT
this is an awesome write it has a lot of power in it keep up the amazing work
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Wow what a great poem and lots of emotion. Keep it up.
Amber
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It's been eliminated.
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I think that we should all be ourselves. It's too much trouble to be who others think we should be. Aside from that if we spent our lives trying to please others where would it end. I love the last line. Very powerful write. Spoken with conviction (written actually) Loved it.
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::Inhales the Spitefulness::
Heh, reminds me of a Bloodhound Gang song: "I don't give a damn if you don't like me 'cause I'm not like you and you're not like me." I like the anger and the expression. -
This was a cool poem with lots of attitude! You go girl
I love it! Keep up the great work
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omg this is awesome.... i wish i could just say this to the stupid girls at school.... the ones infected with the popular disease...... i hate their ways.... lieing bitches thinking they can control our lives lol...... hate em
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thanks... and yeah, I watched a video called "Misery Business" by Paramore... maybe you've heard it before... OMG! IT'S AWESOME! I love the end... (I'm not gonna spoil it for you tho if you all haven't seen it... if u wanna see it.. .go to Youtube.... or the paramore official website... lol.
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i've seen it it's one of my fav songs.... i've also seen her other vidz.... lol.... i've seen so much.... (gonna die of thirst... byee)
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Hehe, a good thing to write about and get of your chest. I'm glad you don't want to be like someone; it's so much better just being you. Good write.
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Another good one! I like the message it has.
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i think i know who this is bout because we're talking bout it now. good right, and damned good way of putting it. i love the ending lines
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thanks! lol.
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great job. I think it is great. I love it very much. Great write.
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thanks for your comment!
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lol...gosh, dont you hate that!
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ha..this is really good...is it based on someone?
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thanks... and yeah, it's sort of about someone... just some stupid chick who thinks she's all that and a bag of pop corn...
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