I despise the day you rejected my love,
When you said my love just wasn’t enough.
I really thought that we would be together,
With you at my side, life couldn’t be better.
I had always imagined that together we would live,
And I would give you the love that I always wanted to give.
But I now hate the way you look at my face,
The look of disgust, the look of disgrace.
I bet you mock me when I’m not there
Oh, how could life be so unfair?
My arms are scarred, my eyes are red,
Better than this, would be being dead.
Why? Why did you inflict such pain?
I think about you, with thoughts of disdain.
But then I remember your radiant face,
And the way you walked with that delicate grace.
I’m not so sure how I feel for you now,
Among all this hatred, I think love still exists somehow.
I still don’t get it! I’m so confused!
Is this feeling hatred, or do I still love you?
My mind is numb, I can’t take it anymore!
How I feel, I’ll never know for sure.
So I go to the kitchen and grab a knife,
With the thought of how this love destroyed my life.
And now I lay here, with an open wound,
And all I can say is “Freedom from you”
Please tell me what you think
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omg omg da emo side ov aaez raza
hey btw take my advice...if she ever duz all dose thing ..gimme a call......we'll murder her.....togeth3r XD
"y dint i think ot dat" (thinks aaez)
"bcuz u were in LOOOVVEEE"
"and becuz i dint tell u my plan on tym XD" -
This is soooooo good. I love this. Very well written. I feel your pain. I feel your sorrow and your broken heart. Good job. Good imagery. Very well done. I'd read more of your work any time
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Love can Be soooooooooo tricky that's for sure. When you have figured out love can you please let me know ???
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heyy it was good haan! - quite deep!
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