Tell me "I love you"
only to shut me up
I can't break out the emotions
Now I've had enough.
Might as well kiss fire good-night
Cuz it'll be me
Saying good-bye
I've been a bitchy little rebel
But at least we know now
You are the real devil
(CHORUS)
Take a step foward
Enter my spell
There's no turning back
Welcome to hell
I was caught in the middle
Now I'm last place
"Honnorable Mention"
Now I need my space
So for it's over,
But not for me
I was left
Dancing with the devil
With the angelic body.
(END CHORUS)
Poison kisses leaves a feeling on my lips
Cuz I don't know how to keep up with this
There's no truth in the stories you say
Follow me... come this way.
Enter the dungeon of doom
Firy rage and death
Be careful as you step in the door
That'll be your final breath
(Until the next life)
(CHROUS)
With eyes of an angel
But the insides od a devil
You just entered
The most dangerous level
He'll take over your mind, heart and soul
No matter how much you plead
He will not let go
So good-luck.
(CHORUS)
HELL HELL HELL!!
*guitar solo*
Dancing with the devil...
Dancing with the devil...
You'll never be free
If you're dancing with the devil
With the angelic body
Author notes
this is very upbeat and loud. very fun 2 jump up and down 2. .this was written more as a joke toward a person who everyone fell in love with cuz of his awesome body, but he really isnt all that nice or w/e. so its like once u fall in love w/ him, uts almost impossible to get out of it. i guess u kinda have 2 read it 2ce 2 understand
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Comments
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Well done you; just mind the word of in the 6th stanza!
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OMG!!!! You have sooooo much talent as a writer. I wish that I could write songs...I tried a few times, but they don't have the melody and the flow as yours does...This is really damn good!!!
~Blood and Ink
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I LOVE IT!!! New No.1 on the Billboard Top 100!!! This was so awesome. I can picture it being very upbeat. Kinda like the song "Girlfriend". Just that kinda beat and tempo and all. You should rhyme more often, you're good at it. lol. I like the guitar solo part in there. It was a good point in the song for it too. I love it!
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