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Sometimes....

Sometimes I feel like the would is shattering
Like everything is falling down around me
Like I'm the piece that never fits

Sometimes I feel like I'm a  potion of a puzzle
Like a square trying to fit in a circular space
Like I just don't fit in

Sometimes I feel like I am alone
Like everyone is a different species
Like no one sees me at all

Sometimes I feel like my life has no purpouse
Like I wasn't ment to be born
Like my existance doesn't matter

Sometimes I feel like a single black dot in a sea of white
Like I'm the ugly duckling
Rejected, abandoned, unwanted

Sometimes I feel like not a soul cares for me
Like my soul is a demon in heaven
Like the forbidden angel

Sometimes I feel like I'm locked in a prison cell
No visitors allowed
Like I was sent into Isolation

Sometimes I feel like I'm fighting a battle I can't win
Like no help will ever arrive
Like I am one against millions

And then I think of you and all the others who see through the Sometimes
And I remember that I do matter, exist, and not rejected
And I know in my heart that Time will eventually
Help those Sometimes Disappear


      -Kelsi

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It has been a long time since I've written anything and would like to know if it is up to snuff with everything else I have have on here.

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  • hurtgurl
    August 15, 2007
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    very good piece