Warning: if you are easily offended, please don't read... If you do get offended, I'm sorry, I wasn't trying to... thank you.
So what if I'm different?
Why would I be like you?
So what, you got a problem with me?
Get over it and deal...
Or don't even have anything to do with me.
Do what, you don't like me.
So what you spread rumors
So what? You judge me
So what? I don't give
A FUCK what you think!
So what if you don't like me?
You don't have to
So what if you want nothing to do with me,
You don't even have to say anything to me...
So what?
I'm "Gothic"
so what?
I'm emo
So what?
I'M A MOTHA FUCKIN
REDNECK PUNK!
GET THE FUCK OVER IT!
Author notes
just something I wrote... felt like writing it... let people know what I think... well, what do you think of this? sorry if this offends anyone, not meaning to.
Please tell me what you think
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I was not offended
Your use of the 'F' word gives your poem that extra kick. I too use the 'F' word and many other swear words when writing. I think it adds power to the poem and I only use swear words where I feel the poem needs it. Your poem could be a song, it's bloody awesome! Keep checking my page for new poems as I have over a hundred already written and many are full on. Once again, bloody awesome! It needs to be read loud. -
lol. I can just imagine someone saying this and just...getting red in the face, and saliva flying. lol. It's great. Awesome read, I thuroughly enjoyed it. Kudos!!!Ku...DOS!
~Jess
P.S.- I have a somewhat similar poem, if you're interested...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3005038
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Usually when people think like this it means they need to be strong because they do have an insecurity problem. Thing is, if you didn't have a problem with it then you wouldn't worry about it and then wouldn't have written this poem. Not to criticize in anyway, there is nothing wrong with having insecurities. We all have them, and I guess this poem serves as an example of some people's coping mechanisms.
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i absolutely freakin love this poem. i wish i would have come up with it haha
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haha. thanks!
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hell yeah!
hahaha, alright!!!! thats just awesome, i know the feeling aye, loved it!
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well then..that was interesting! A good expressive poem. Good job!
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Thanks!
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so what?
I personally don't like this one... I still prefer the one about Anorexia Nervosa! -
Excellant/intriguing/reflective
I think I really rather like it. It's healthy to blow off steam every once in a while, and this write was a good way to do that. By the why, a friend of mine, when her son & daughter were teen-agers, they were Goths. So Goths, as such, do not offend me; nor did any of your language or ideas or the way you expressed yourself. Again, a very good write.
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lol
sounds like you are pissed at somebody. But it is good to write about it & write it off. I do I know that
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lol babe are you ok dear???? o my hope no one is bothering you i hate to get in trouble i dont have the room for it but be careful for me please dear it will be ok
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a great write i liked this one it was really good keep it up
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OH WOW....the language the language....porr tory's eyes
just playing. well done...or shall i say well expressed. Keep em coming girl
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Nice!
This is a awesome poem, and I can relate to it. Good Job!
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