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Can't Take It

i can't take much more of your hugs and i love u's.
i just can't handle the stress
at first i thought it was all so great
that was just my guess

i THOUGHT i really liked you
but i guess i just thought wrong
i thought that i can be tough about it
i THOUGHT i can be strong

it turned out to be one big mistake
and now i'm paying the price
now i don't think i want you
no more inside my life

it's over now i must declare
i just can't take this anymore
i thought it was you, but it has to be me
to pick my heart off of the floor

i need to spend some time alone
my feelings i did betray
but i just can't take you anymore
i'm leaving you today.

Author notes

this is 2 derrick.... he rushed things and it turns out i nver had any love feelings toward him what so ever. sounds harsh, but its only true

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  • FaeryMouse silver member
    September 11, 2007
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    Hey Girl.....Thats a really good piece....And I can relate...Take care


  • Roxy Riot
    September 10, 2007

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    hey a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do. this is a really good piece about non-love. it just happens sometimes. it's an awesome piece. I love it!