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Those Eyes...

Those hazel eyes of yours hold a story
That only I can read
When they look in my direction
I can no longer breathe

Not one class we have together
But I see you everywhere
You're in my thoughts, you're in my head
And from the side I catch your glare

I know your name only by people
Gossiping about you at the lunch table
You don't me, I don't know you
But those eyes carry your label

You have no clue someone's watching you
But I can see you in a far
I love everything about you
But I don't know who you are

So badly I want to walk up to you
And look you straight into those eyes
But scared I'll make a fool of myself
I remain hidden in dark lies

You don't know who I am
But I know you only slightly
I think I love you off recent pass
And how you really remind me...

One day I'll become your friend
That sounds to good to be true
But I find highly insane
To actaully belive I love you.

Those eyes told a story,
It tells me when they bleed
Your eyes hold a story
Than only I can read

Those eyes told me a story
That the middle is hard to comprehend
But they did tell me a sad one,
"I Love You..."
THE END

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jonathan, we dont know each other, but i know u well enough to know u have hidden pain

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  • xxlonely-girlxx
    October 29
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    this is amazing..i love it..i feel the same way about a guy at my school. he plays varisty football and he's the big guy on the team..everybody loves him..i could never tell him how i feel though because if i did i could never look at him again.AWESOME poem though!!!


  • Icantcmylifefrmhere
    September 24, 2007

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    duuuudde!!!! i love this poem so flipping much! it reminds me how i feel bout this dude kind of except for the fact that the dude happens to be my best guy friend with a girlfriend.... he he.... ill probably never be able to tell him how i feel....


  • Roxy Riot
    September 12, 2007

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    OMG! This is so amazing and beautiful and you should let him know someone cares. Sometimes that's all someone needs is an understanding ear. This is beautiful, darling. Just beautiful.