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Sheep's Blood

Nothing to spread across my door
cause there's no door at all
Let the angel in but
it was a mistake
The fiery sword you wield
penetrates my back

I crash down to the floor
wasn't ready for the fall
Feel your next cut
This must be fate
Gave her my own shield
Possessing you lack



Is this my vision come truth
Feels of a nightmare
But angels surround me
Both upon self
One of sweet purity
The other is rank

Bared you all of my fruits
with not much shared
Your halos I brightly see
held as a shelf
atop two bases pointy
cutting my heart sank


Stealing our firsts like the Egyptian plague
Even if our faiths are not the same
Using your magik
Speed super-sonic
Climbing much higher on a divine check-list
Just another biblical hit list
"Not my fault
Just my heart"
well....
hahahahu...
well...

Is this a curse or gift
knowing deep down I am right
Watch things happen in bloody succession
Couldn't be further from the fiction

Throw up that sheep's blood to keep him away
The angel is lurking and stalking his prey
Drain out your sheep 'til it's empty and cold
You are a drone if one might be so bold
Can't empty yourself like you empty the sheep
(than) the angel will come and forever you'll sleep
Is it worth it to die or be drained of your life?
Neither will work, but revenge will suffice.

Stealing our firsts like the Egyptian plague
Even if our faiths are not the same
Using your magik
Speed super-sonic
Climbing much higher on a divine check-list
Just another biblical hit list
"Not my fault
Just my heart"
Well...
Well...FUCK!
            YOUR!
                  GOD!

FUCK!
        YOUR!
                  GOD!

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  • Just... Kate
    November 11, 2007
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    Wow, I haven't read your stuff in a while. This is a very passionate and moving poem, and I agree with Molly, this seems personal. This is my favorite part:

    Is this my vision come truth
    Feels of a nightmare
    But angels surround me
    Both upon self
    One of sweet purity
    The other is rank

    I can't wait for your next one


  • mollyeh13
    October 31, 2007

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    damn brett
    you are amazing
    not gonna lie
    [i know right hahah jk]
    seriously this was awesome
    and it sounds very personal
    which made it that much more powerful!
    awesome job
    lovs!!! molly
  • nikki
    September 17, 2007
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    i don't get it. Too many big words..lol