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With A Gentle Kiss And Caress

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Trust those who seek
those truths revealed within time,
Reawaken a heart
only met with love,

A heart that was closed
opened up to see
the world around it
and now it included me,

Midsummer in dreams
where eyes touch and reach
those places where some dare not,
Fantasy and desire her combine
in the eyes of love and mine,
Where will it take us,
Who can tell,

And in that revelation
the story only begins
wherein a possibility
is varied
to touch those
who look beyond a veil
showed only by the darkness.

March 300, 2000

By: B.E. Whitehorn & Maxine Fitzpatrick-Atkins

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Written January 21st, 2002

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  • Redstormy gold member
    January 19, 2004
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    Wow Bill this is an awesome write, beautifully written and displayed my friend.

    Red

  • Angel Dreams
    January 19, 2004
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    ooohh my the picture itself is outstanding. its soo beautiful. for the poem. its amazing. im glad tho that u cited it lol we dun want any problems. nicely written

    -Angel
  • Decosta
    January 18, 2004
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    Well I really enjoyed this poem. I really like the picture, but I don't believe it really fits the poem. But NO critiques at all. I really liked your word usage and my favorite lines were:
    Trust those who seek
    those truths revealed within time

    Very nice. Hope to read more soon.