Intense fire from our lovemaking heats up the room
Next to you I feel my heart beat uncontrollably
Time passes so slowly as we collide continuously
Into another place and time so far from reality
Making me quiver as you massage and take me all the way inside of you
Amazing is this feeling, one I haven't felt for so long
Teasing and stroking every inch of my manhood
Enticing and seducing every part of my heart and soul
In your arms I feel so secure and alive
Nothing could ever come between the love that we both share
Touching every part of your gorgeous body
Each tender sensation carrying us over the threshold of love
Never wanting this to end I pull out of you and throw you on the bed
Tasting every part of your luscious body with my hungry tongue
Intensity builds and you suddenly explode all over me
Opening your legs, I push you up onto my shoulders
Now as I press you up against the wall I thrust into you
So soft and beautiful as I slowly release you and kiss your tender lips
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Want You by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 22, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love acrostics. lovely and beautiful!!!!!!!!
Mylee -
WOW. BEAUITUFL ACROSTIC.
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I think you did an amazing job on this!! Acrostics can so difficult to write...making every line flow into the next one without sounding forced...Good luck in the contest
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Great Acrostic
And very appropiate for the pic. Thank you for entering our contest!
Brazos
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Amazing Acrostic
This a very astonishing write and you show just how precious she is to you...I see this write from the male point of view.....Thnaks for entering our contest...novy
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ooooooooooooo - J #'s, my brother, fine work you have here. Great mood and sweet intimacy without the vulgar touch. Keep it up Bro!! ~ Mykeeee
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Amazing....
Loved everything about this....wow
I got all....well TMI, forgot this is a PG site
you got me though
loved this.
ephiphany
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I really gotta stop reading these at work HeHe. You are really really really good. at these sensual acrostics. 
Whew~ still fanning cheeks avoiding eye contact with coworkers.
Bravo sweetie, this is amazing stuff
Delila
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nice acrostic!!! they can be sooo difficult but you got this one down to a T, nice imagery and emotion. Liked the picture you used.,
Lexy xxx -
body language whew J you a good lover honey i know it this was so damn delicious in erotic and heat i love it to death i am book marking this you know how to unwine my boiling mind this was hot you
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WOW I think the sign language speaks for itself 
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Excellent Write,
Way to go brother, I wish you all the best!
This here piece is a very well crafted one indeed!
Thanks for sharing, and keep this up!
Brother Timothy
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wow, love that pic. my AP daughter has it on one of her pieces, never get tired of seeing it. this is just gorgeous! thank you for the read, be well abd be blessed.
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