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Returning

The pain which has rocked my world,
Is slowling beginging to fade.
And secretly I must admit,
I'm no longer so afraid.

The bitterness and sadness,
That ruled me, day to day;
Is turning to a happy glow,
That has made me want to stay.

So this I write in thanks,
For everything you do,
The darkness is disappearing,
And it's all because of you.

Author notes

Once again really random. Written mostly because I was bugged to put something up. So therefoe, this is for Seej, my inspiration at the moment and my rock.

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  • Tiggs
    October 9, 2007

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    wow/ best u've written yet i think it's real and i can feel it.. not that ur other stuff isn't realy real lol... it's just this is raw ... or rawer then most of ur other stuff. i love it


  • Stranded Angel
    October 9, 2007

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    cha ching!
    awesomeness much
    man im just catching up on peoples poems cause i hadnt commented in ages
    and im like wo... so mmaaaaaaaanyyyy

    i likes this. tis good


  • Walking Tall
    October 8, 2007

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    ah but the idea is not to write because you are bugged
    you write at your convenience
    for you
    not for the adoring masses
    fuck them all i say
    i'll write wen i'm god damned ready...
    maybe i'm projecting =P
    jokes
    nice write
    its good 2 be inspiration
    seej


    • Phiona
      October 8, 2007
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      Hehe. I did write when I was ready, I only put it up cause I was being bugged... Lol. This one has been sitting on my computer for about a week and a half