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The man in the moon

I don't like the man in the moon
He has too little left to do
And too fickle an ornament
to illuminate my firmament

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  • WhispersWhispers
    October 24, 2007
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    Very very nice short poem, very deep in thought, great job!

    • Eponymous
      October 25, 2007
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      Thank you very much for both for reading and commenting, please share some of your work on your page so I may return the delightful indulgence of being read :-)...cheers