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Passion and Lust-Acrostic

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Pointing her finger at me, she motioned me over
A tall dark and sophisticated beauty with lust in her eyes
She walked up to me and pushed me down to my knees
So seductive as she placed her two legs upon my shoulders
In an instant I picked her up and began to suck her juicy lips
Over and over again as I pushed myself to the limit
Nibbling erotically on her pink little clit

All you could hear were her moans and cries
Now as I placed her body gently on the wall
Deep inside of her is where I wanted to be as I

Licked her beautiful breasts all over
Utter bliss swept over her face as her eyes rolled back
Sending her over the edge as I began to thrust deep inside
Time was ours as passion and lust became us

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  • Whenitefallz
    November 6, 2007
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    AHAHH! This was insane!! Legs on the shoulders, I think my mind went semi blank after that {woohooo!!}!
    This kissed lips ~ MmmHmm, surely it did!

    {HeeHee on Pif's picture. She knows good and well that's her. Maybe she'll let me borrow the boots.. Yeah..}


  • Silvos. silver member
    November 5, 2007
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    Very Hot Indeed. Erotic in all aspects of the term. Great write.

    Silvos.


  • raingoddess gold member
    November 1, 2007

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    Hot

    This is one hot poem,I wish you would have went and given us alot more, great write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess


    • Jeremy0826 gold member
      November 1, 2007

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      I still could! lol Don't know what other word I should add to it. If I do, I'll let you know. Thanks a lot for reading and for your thoughts on this one. I appreciate it!


      Jeremy0826

  • MahoganyFlow
    October 30, 2007

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    I liked this. I felt like it leaves you wanting more. Good job and congrats on the HM.

  • Levesta silver member
    October 29, 2007
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    HOT LOVE

  • onesugar silver member
    October 29, 2007
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    Lovely acrostic jeremy

    Hot and Steamy! An excellent read.
    ~sugar~


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    OH my
    all this for my contest
    you out did yourself dearest
    for this is just perfect of those dropped panties

    Riftkin


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    steamy!

    MY MAN, MY MAN! This is a excellent piece!hot n' steamy and well composed! Good luck in the contest!


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    October 26, 2007

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    this was good j i see you used a little raw you know your dear sweet jewels love to see the bad come out the good this is gold honey

    take care i love you


  • Ephiphany gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    Where did you get my picture from...

    just kidding...it will be just a tade bit darker in my case and a lil thicker...Get down....literally
    You know I love this, ok....nothing more to say other than AWESOME

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