Let me fall
Let me sink
Let me drown
Let me bleed untill I die
Let me cry untill my tears run dry
I've tried so hard
And sunk so far
So tired of fighting
Please let me stop fighting
I give up
I give in
Why try for dreams that are out of reach?
Just let the darkness consume me
I've failed
Author notes
I wrote this in February. Because of everything that's been going on, read my authors page, it took me a long time to post this. I was extremely depressed and down on myself when I wrote this. I am not feeling like this anymore. In fact I am succeding in many areas of my life.
What did you think
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excellent~
Thought provoking and very sad..
I don't think you have failed because you are venting your angst out in a poem...
Sad but well done
Hugs
Susan~
P.S The only trouble is I had to highlight to read it you might want to change the font so one can see it
Hugs again
Susan~~~
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Thank you so much for the comment. I don't feel like I've failed anymore. Thank's for the tip I'll see if I can get this font color to change.
~Amanda~
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what a wonderful thing to know that you have been able to climb out of the deep dark hole you were in when you wrote this very powerful and sad poem. Keep climbing and climbing..you can do it!! hugs suzanne
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Thank you. I'm glad I've managed to pull myself out of it too. Especially since my grandma just died. I guess I'm holding up better then I think.
~Amanda~
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Wow, this is really dark. I absolutely adore your style of writing. None of the parts were out of place or anything. Nice write.
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Thank you for the comment. I'll have to come read some of yours soon.
~Amanda~
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